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Art Trade: Palantean

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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

I love the pose which is very in-character for Starla. The composition of the overall picture is great and her outstretched wings are a nice touch - especially as you've got the feather arrangement pretty much spot on. You draw hands really well and you've got the lines on arms and legs where muscle and bone show through just right!

Since you've asked for critique, here's a couple of bits: you are already aware you have a bit of trouble with feet. The best thing I can say on that is to look at anatomical references and your own feet and learn what you can from those. The bits you draw well you draw very well, so it'd be spot on to see you add feet to your repertoire.

Another thing I might add is that you've been quite restrained with strength of colour and with shading. I think you can afford to be a bit more bold with both.

Thank you once again for sending me this piece - it came through quickly as your half of the trade, which is great.